1. What will be the subject of your profile
essay? What place will you profile?
I will profile Tulare Regional
Medical Center (TRMC).
2. What will be the dominant impression your essay
will evoke?
It will describe how they
treated my mom and me at the hospital.
3. What narrative perspective will you choose?
First-person ("I" or "we")? The first-person perspective provides a sense of intimacy.
4. What will be your "Beginning"?
First-person ("I" or "we")? The first-person perspective provides a sense of intimacy.
4. What will be your "Beginning"?
The beginning will say why my
mom and me where at TRMC
5. How will you structure your "Middle"?
The middle will just go in order. I will just describe her stay and describe everything that happened to her.
6. What will you use in your "Conclusion"?
The conclusion will be just a
summary of my stay.
7. How will you use dialogue?
8. What "Characters" will your essay
feature?
This essay’s characters will be my mom, dad, sister, baby brother and I.
This essay’s characters will be my mom, dad, sister, baby brother and I.
9. What "Illuminating Details and
Anecdotes" will you use?
10. How will you use all (or most of) the
senses? What visual images will you use? What auditory
images? What tactile images? What gustatory images (tastes)?
What olfactory images (smells)?
I will be using visual, auditory, tactile images.
I will be using visual, auditory, tactile images.
11. What verb tense will you use?
I will be
using past tense.
Alma,
ReplyDeleteThis sounds good. I hope your mother is doing well.
As for your closing, don't just provide a summary. Think of something more interesting/vivid to leave your reader impressed.